blog #3


  • Is the the purpose of the essay to educate, announce, entertain, or persuade?
  • The purpose of essay can be depends on the writer. if the writer essay to educate the essay will be based on education.
  • Who might be interested in the topic of the essay?
  • Is important understand the purpose of essay so, the writer can stick to their point. if the essay is about entertainment  than it should be focus only on entertaining  .
  • Who would be impacted by the essay or the information within it?
  • The writer   must be interest in the topic so the writer will gain more passion about the essay.
  • What does the reader know about this topic?
  • the reader know only a brief  description about the topic but they will know more by reading the whole essay.
  • What does the reader need to know in order to understand the essay’s points?
  • the information within the essay will help writer prove their thesis and understand what kind of essay it is.
  • What kind of hook is necessary to engage the readers and their interest?
  • hook should be debatable and appealing  to reader’s emotion.
  • What level of language is required? Words that are too subject-specific may make the writing difficult to grasp for readers unfamiliar with the topic.
  • The language should be formal and writer shouldn’t use synonym that doesn’t work with the sentence, it could lead to confusion to the readers.
  • What is an appropriate tone for the topic? A humorous tone that is suitable for an autobiographical, narrative essay may not work for a more serious, persuasive essay.
  • the tone should be according to the essay, of the writer wrote persuasive essay than the tone should be serious or if it is about entertainment than the tone could be joyful.
  • 2.    Write a draft of your opening paragraph based on Chapter 3.2 Opening Paragraphs from English Composition: Connect, Collaborate, Communicate
  • The danger of self driving car. the automative system technology has improved drastically and it is used in enormous   number in this modern days. Using automative system is useful and makes people lives much easier by doing the heavy works and it is highly recommended however self driving car shouldn’t not be legalize because  of  people safety concern . For instance self driving car could be trick by human because it cant make  a decision by its own. furthermore it could be also get hacked   and cause accident since  its  all computer based . although self driving car made people life much easier people should drive themself.