Blog post 3#

Part One: Briefly answer these questions:



  • Is the purpose of the essay to educate, announce, entertain, or persuade?


The purpose of this essay is to educate. The instructor was sharing the importance of the prewriting. He was giving good ideas that can lead a good and organized final writing. 



  • Who might be interested in the topic of the essay ?


students are the target of the subject. Because it gives them an idea of what will be required of them in their writing



  • Who would be impacted by the essay or the information within it?


Students will take advantage of it. Also, the beginner writers.


  • What does the reader know about this topic?


It helps in structure the essay, and makes a clear thesis statement.


  • What does the reader need to know in order to understand the essay’s



The essay is appropriate for the title, to be dependent on research, and for the words used to be in a correct and appropriate position.



  •  What kind of hook is necessary to engage the readers and their interest?


The hook can be a short story, quotes, or asking some interesting questions in order to grab attention  


  • What level of language is required? Words that are too subject-specific may make the writing difficult to grasp for readers unfamiliar with the topic.


Words should meet the academic standards. Does not include slang, and the word itself should be understandable and be in the level of the audience. 


  • What is an appropriate tone for the topic? A humorous tone that is suitable for an autobiographical, narrative essay may not work for a more serious, persuasive essay.


Tone should depend on the subject of the article. It should be serious and appropriate for readers

Part two :Write a draft of your opening paragraph based on Chapter 3.2 Opening Paragraphs from English Composition: Connect, Collaborate, Communicate.

The turmoil caused by the murder of an African American citizen George Floyd by a white police officer in Minneapolis on May 25 continues to resonate globally, as African Americans continue to protest in the streets against racism and police brutality. Despite American propaganda as the “land of dreams and freedoms” that spread since the beginning of the last century, this was not the case for black Americans, who were not equivalent to white Americans in most aspects of life. Black citizens were subject to the principle of inequality, and did not stage rebellions until the 1960s – which continue today – as a result of the emergence of revolutionary personalities of black Americans, such as Malcolm X and Martin Luther King who brought about important changes in the history of blacks in America. Therefore, the movement, “Blacks Life Matters,” is an extension of the long struggle for African-Americans in American history.